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I lie on the ground
Unpolished and torn
What a beautiful time
To feel so forlorn
Apollo above us
A quite blinding smile
Giving up on the Lord
It seems so futile
The heavens above us
Cerulean, marvelous
Dotted up in the sky
Cirrus, cumulus
I lie on the grass
An emerald glade
All the numbness I feel
Yet I sense every blade
A jab on the finger
My arm, slashed and skinned
A battalion of swords
On the sound of the wind
What a wonderful day
Just a bright atmosphere
But I feel so depressed
Melancholy unsteered
I lie on the earth
All the clovers I see
Are of four-leaf descent
But all bad luck to me
The dandelions dance
In summer wear dress
And the daisies just sweet
It's my cheeks they caress
Unpolished and torn
What a beautiful time
To feel so forlorn
Apollo above us
A quite blinding smile
Giving up on the Lord
It seems so futile
The heavens above us
Cerulean, marvelous
Dotted up in the sky
Cirrus, cumulus
I lie on the grass
An emerald glade
All the numbness I feel
Yet I sense every blade
A jab on the finger
My arm, slashed and skinned
A battalion of swords
On the sound of the wind
What a wonderful day
Just a bright atmosphere
But I feel so depressed
Melancholy unsteered
I lie on the earth
All the clovers I see
Are of four-leaf descent
But all bad luck to me
The dandelions dance
In summer wear dress
And the daisies just sweet
It's my cheeks they caress
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Unfinished unfinished because there is still more to add. Schedule's like hell. D:<
EDIT:
OK, posted the last few lines, edited the title.
I wrote this LONG ago, about the time around camp(last week of May) and I kept on revising and reworking it, but I never got into the part of adding more lines. Project unfinished, I know. But I feel it sounds professional enough for the people on dA(YOU!), so I guess it's OK to post this.
WU=Work Unfinished, Because "unfinished" is too long to write.
EDIT:
OK, posted the last few lines, edited the title.
I wrote this LONG ago, about the time around camp(last week of May) and I kept on revising and reworking it, but I never got into the part of adding more lines. Project unfinished, I know. But I feel it sounds professional enough for the people on dA(YOU!), so I guess it's OK to post this.
WU=Work Unfinished, Because "unfinished" is too long to write.
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finally.. good to see you're doing great even though busy. TSMMR
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